Tried to write a poem. Not good enough to be posted but I am still posting it because it is my first one. I will improve I hope ππ
Love is rainbow or sun shine, Or it is the emotion which makes you mine?
The spell it has casted over me is such,I know what is wrong still I donβt care much!
It has no wrong or right,It just knows how to keep one awake whole night.
I wonder where it will take me, it will make me stronger or will break me.
I donβt care and I am moving ahead, on the road which once I left.
It is not a word, it is a feeling, it gives me energy of unveiling!
I will explore its beauty and ugliness, and tell the world I love him with madness!
Still so much is left inside me, keeping it for the time he will find me.
Very good π Never give up…
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Thank you sir ππ
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Nice
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Niceππ
Keep writing!π―
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Thank you π
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Really pretty. Keep writing.
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Thank you π
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Keep visiting and try to read it fully to understand better instead of just hitting likes.ππ
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One can read all and hit a like after that too π
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Yeahh. Dats possible too
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Nice poem .Keep writingπ
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What do you mean it’s not good enough to post, who told you that lie? Any poem that comes from the heart is good enough and I loved that oneπΉ. As time goes on, you’ll develop a feel for what and how you write and you’ll only improve your craft. But I liked it and I’m glad you posted it, never say your heart isn’t good enough. πβ€οΈ
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Thank you so much! π yes I will try to improve π thank you for reading
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You won’t try to improve, you will improve because you’re already good.π
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Nice! Esp last two lines! β€
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Very good….i knew it would be good….love ur style…great work.
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Thank you π
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You are welcome…keep writing great stuffπ€
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That was amazing effort!! I loved it π
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Thank you Vidisha π Pretty name
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Hahahhaha! Thanks π
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Love is something cannot be described, but you managed to write about it…
Love is something we feel ,
Well written… Good post.. π
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I cant believe that this is your first try π±marvelous! keep writing!
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Thank you Akhil π
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keep writing bud!
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Yes sure! People like you motivate me π
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For the first one it is really good dear… keep writing
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Thank you ππ
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I think you did beautifully, well done.
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Thank you π
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It was really great! Each of it’s lines were rich in emotions. Great job!!! π
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Thank you Adika ππ
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Keep writing!
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